please make it long. XNXX …Princess_jasmineReport 2013-04-01 13:56:29good story but needs more build up, storyline and character. but very,very short… xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-20 23:13:15good story. looking forward to reading more from you lolanonymous readerReport 2012-11-02 20:38:57Well you definitely to work on your stories more. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-20 23:13:15good story. Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… looking forward to reading more from you lolanonymous readerReport 2012-11-02 20:38:57Well you definitely to work on your stories more. but very,very short… but very,very short… Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1»
