You’ve given me a headache with your utter stupidity you ridiculous cretin!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:35:15Ok a comment. Desi xxx 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. But as a writer, I’d say it wasn’t your bag.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:18:26You need to learn the definition of “best” as your name is completely wrong.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:16:02I couldn’t get very far with the horindous destruction of the english language that was going on. It was a cute story. But you should let someone else write the final draft for you. Do everyone a favor, quit posting ignorant shit like this and leave writing to those who have at least a basic understanding of the English language. Thanks or sharing the story. As others have said, spelling, grammar, and format are important, but you have an interesting
