if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. Its really refreshing to find a writer on here who i understand! XNXX more!!READERReport 2007-04-21 13:50:14too long? if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-25 19:26:26fantastic, ingore the comments about the british lingo, that guy’s obviously a complete joker. maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build
