Knowing when to put in quotes and how make the reader know for sure who’s sayin’ what. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. Sex video IF ONLY it were laid out differently. I’d really hate to see this story end before it had a chance to be a really good story. IF ONLY it were laid out differently. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story, let me make corrections, then send it back to you. I really do like the concept of this story. Fix it and this could be a great story.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 08:45:19AKSHAY
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