If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
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3/10«123» 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. Hindi XXX 14 comments«123»READERReport 2006-04-21 20:30:39As a female i loved this story. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. Keep practicing. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. bb gg bg etc. Keep practicing. Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
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3/10«123» Keep practicing. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work!
