Way too choppy and hard to read. Porn With that being said, you definitely need to proof read your work before submitting it, or else have someone do it for you. More please !«1234» I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. I’am very sorry about the weird A’s but they were not there when I submitted the stories so can any members on this that knows how i can take them out because i want all my
