31 comments«12345»jerryr6Report 2015-08-11 23:22:34Very hot story; and MUCH easier to read without all of the “leader dots”, (. Mature sex . . . . …) that you use in most of your stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-13 03:07:04Positive but not very! Much obliged.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-22 20:28:20rushed no character development very little plot and AS USUAL NO END. 31 comments«12345»jerryr6Report 2015-08-11 23:22:34Very hot story; and MUCH easier to read without all of the “leader dots”, (. . . . . …) that you use in most of your stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-13 03:07:04Positive but not very! 31 comments«12345»jerryr6Report 2015-08-11 23:22:34Very hot story; and MUCH easier to read without all of the “leader dots”, (. . . . . …) that you use in most of your stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-13 03:07:04Positive but not very! It would have been so much hotter if you had limited the story to you and just your sister!
