-first commenter-«12» when I read it, it was in paragraphs, and it still is. Mature sex -first commenter-«12» when I read it, it was in paragraphs, and it still is. Yes the rules are a bonus…nicely done.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:49:44It was in paragraphs. 7 comments«12»SilverSwanReport 2020-01-05 03:36:22Too hard to even bother with in current format.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-24 16:58:12This was really sexy and I loved how it made sense and it wasn’t sloppy. -first commenter-«12» when I read it, it was in paragraphs, and it still is. -first commenter-«12» Good Story!anonymous readerReport 2013-05-24 11:31:55This is an excellent story you had a well developed plot and the he characters harm personality and I would love to read more it had a hot ending and I am now curious as to how things will progress between Killian and aidonanonymous
