I’d love to see the story fleshed out to the max. Just enough detail to be able to place the story in almost any genre, be it Sci-fi, horror, or just plain, pure, simple sex. Desi xxx 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-01-20 12:58:04Nice first story! Just enough detail to be able to place the story in almost any genre, be it Sci-fi, horror, or just plain, pure, simple sex. I’d love to see the story fleshed out to the max. I’d love to see the story fleshed out to the max. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-01-20 12:58:04Nice first story! One note, though: a “tong” is a tool for picking things up, unless this IS sci-fi and his “tongue” is really a “tong”.«1»
