1st comment incomplete!!!Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:22:16I think you need to better identify & develop characters. Are Ganonymous readerReport 2012-05-13 10:18:34both tina and gina should get pregnant with the father’s babyanonymous readerReport 2011-02-08 06:45:39agian a bid to rushed some part. Amateur sex Are Ganonymous readerReport 2012-05-13 10:18:34both tina and gina should get pregnant with the father’s babyanonymous readerReport 2011-02-08 06:45:39agian a bid to rushed some part. Are Ganonymous readerReport 2012-05-13 10:18:34both tina and gina should get pregnant with the father’s babyanonymous readerReport 2011-02-08 06:45:39agian a bid to rushed some part. calm down and read the story a few times before postinganonymous readerReport 2011-02-03 05:27:10draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggeeedddd it out too long. A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story).
