Really, don’t hold back, hit them hard you moron!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 12:22:26totally agree with other readers, crap, gave up after first paragraph«12» Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. Okxxx I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. remove all the greek names it is to confusing.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 17:16:11For those you are complaining, I will write again and proofread my stuff. I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this.
