I’m all for extra information, but not when that information has no relevance what so ever to the story. Other than that the sex scenes are very hot and well written. Milf sex Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us. punctuation, dreadful. And who the hell is Danielle? I think your writing style sucks. Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us. Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? Someone is never arrested or held for a civil suit, which is what a lawsuit is. oh and who the fuck is danielle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-10 22:49:03The setup needs either more focus or elimination.
