4/10READERReport 2006-12-23 11:17:44too short,need details.great possibilities.try again.5/10READERReport 2006-10-30 21:50:36Booo try again«123» 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-11 09:25:14no background rushed sex no detail and no end. Mature sex 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-11 09:25:14no background rushed sex no detail and no end. when you have incest and don’t stay together after you end up hating each other because every time you see each other it will break your heart knowing that one or both of you moved on.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-10 23:20:34not bad!Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-17 15:06:52Reads like it’s someone else’s work, but then again maybe they all are? 4/10READERReport 2006-12-23 11:17:44too short,need details.great possibilities.try again.5/10READERReport 2006-10-30 21:50:36Booo try again«123» 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-11 09:25:14no background rushed sex no detail and no end. I agree with others, though – add more detail. it really ruins a story when the characters don’t stay together. I agree with
