3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-31 23:34:17creative way to narrate the story. “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. You jizz One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. Nice going.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 22:00:55i liked it :)Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 20:50:50Why do people not use tags? Give the readers a reason to click on your story!«1» Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”? One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing.
