To start, the tab key exists for a reason. xhamster Build up the story a lot more, create foreplay, make details, etc. Still, pretty good, I’m just here to make it better.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:50:39the story built up nicely until you got to the sex part and then it went along too fast with a poor description of the sex itself. . . . . . … Finally, if you are going to write a sex story, or any story for that matter, make the theme, in this case, the actual sex, take up more than 4 paragraphs. Next, never write something cliche like `Enough about me`, especially when you have barely written a paragraph about the character.
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