I personally don’t see a problem with your story. Characters have good dimensional qualities; I can imagine who and how they are as I read. Youjizz 116 lb is skeletal. Very very good:)milexasReport 2009-08-30 16:29:08liked it alot but like one make a second part with others joining in say like he black mails her with the tapereaderReport 2009-01-31 01:01:05Hey, you woman-hating moron: a normal weight for a slim 5’10” woman is 145 lb. 116 lb is skeletal. Characters have good dimensional qualities; I can imagine who and how they are as I read. I like how you tell things from Julie’s perspective, it usually is harder to describe things from an outsider’s point of view. Liked the part where she stood and felt the pain of having been fucked. I like how you
