Who gives a shit about sentence structure? Amateur sex If we were reading for literary purposes we wouldn’t be reading free porn stories online. Structure counts, if we cannot tell where sentences and paragraphs are, how can we understand the story. Structure counts, if we cannot tell where sentences and paragraphs are, how can we understand the story. 7/10READERReport 2005-09-12 14:58:28to comment writer “Archaic”: You’re a worse speller than some of the so-called sex story “authors.” Come on, guy, Hemingway has only one “M.” and “primitive” doesn’t contain an “A.”
The story wasn’t bad at all, I thought. Your dialogue was very primative, your descriptions were juvenile, it just was not very entertaining.
Actors:
Mirei Yokoyama / Tatsu
