the changing tenses, and viewpoint. tnaflix bb gg bg etc. I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! Keep practicing. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. 14 comments«123»READERReport 2006-04-21 20:30:39As a female i loved this story. I found the grammar checker on my program I write in and kept the point of view to one person. bb gg bg etc. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. I have posted the next part and once they
