4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 13:05:29Well. Okxxx … You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. Thanks.«1» First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. It will smooth out your style and make the story more “comfortable” to read. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! Formatting was also terrible. It will smooth out your style and make the story more “comfortable” to read. I have two suggestions. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story!
