Why would they leave??? Porn Hard to imagine the son and daughter having enough energy after all the sex activity, to play sports of any kind. Will the daughter and son stay with mom or will they eventually leave her???? gave it a 9/10.READERReport 2007-05-15 10:57:05I’m not to keen on this, it’s so unlikely to happen.3/10 you must try harder!«12» THIS NEEDS A MAJOR REWRITE USING A GOOD EDITORREADERReport 2007-06-06 16:17:09start from the beginning, this would be a great part 2 or 3.READERReport 2007-05-17 07:09:23Great story. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-31 11:14:58no paragraphs and you started in the middle of the story this shoould have been chapter two out of three delete and rewrite and use a good editor from now onanonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 20:54:58EVER HEARD OF PARAGRAPHS ? Will the daughter and son stay with mom
