How in the world could anybodsy say this was a good story???READERReport 2005-09-25 23:01:45Good, hot and fast. Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? Desi xxx Work on characterization, plot development and descriptive language. That said, it’s not a bad story–you could rewrite it by filling it out. That said, it’s not a bad story–you could rewrite it by filling it out. It ruined the story totally. Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? Work on characterization, plot development and descriptive language. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … Best of luck!READERReport 2005-09-26 11:18:28Well, now we have the titmans perspective.
