However. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. tnaflix However. Very few spelling and punctuation errors. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Terrificly written. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Very few spelling and punctuation errors. Even someone who is submissive I dont think would break so easy. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. However. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Terrificly written. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1»
