those are two of a large number of mistakes that I read in about the first 3 paragraphs.«1» So if someone happens to like my story and would like to help me, please send me a message
.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-21 17:32:06well it seems that you have a good nack for writing but a shocking nack for spelling and correct word use. . Xvideos … proof read not prove. …then in your story Dust of Two days not Dust of wo days. … I highly recoment putting your story into a program like ms-word and have the spell/grammer checker turned on, then just copy and paste to this sight. . … 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12 10:56:354celKy Fresh thoughts, fresh view on the subject..!anonymous readerReport 2011-12-22 07:27:32Thank you for your comment. So if someone happens to like my story and would like
